I must’ve dozed off into the ease of a new sunlight
as my body became a surfer caressing
the high rolling waves of the impossible,
roaring as the deep surrender
of the ocean air I became
the fearless warrior conquering
relentless gladiators through the armor of spirit
and a toughness that shattered barricades
into mercy;
last night while dreaming,
I became the breakthrough on the collision
course with the wrecking ball of fear;
self-fear
threatening to break the glass shield
of determination glaring over the sea of strength.
Last night while dreaming,
I became the energy emerging
from lightning bolts exploding against
the steel bars of internal passion.
Last night while dreaming,
I became the greatest inspiration standing
as a champion, hand raised, in the middle
of a ring surrounded by the flames of hardship,
and last night while dreaming
I became the endorsement of victory embracing
every challenge as possible.
© 2010
Tarringo T. Vaughan
this is one of yr best.first rate.arrival confident Exuberance is beauty Blake said."caressing waves....of the impossible"-poets wish for lines like that
ReplyDeleteFucking amazing surrealism, imagery, and symbolism my friend. Very inspiring as well. Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteI really love the transformation in this poem, how it does come to you as a dream! Some of the most defining moments come as previews when were most relaxed and this really shows the power of a dream!
ReplyDeleteThis is my favorite poetic breakthrough moment..
last night while dreaming,
I became the breakthrough on the collision
course with the wrecking ball of fear;
self-fear
threatening to break the glass shield
of determination glaring over the sea of strength.
@Harry...wow..thank you very much..@Robert..thank you man..appreciate you reading! @Ava Thank you as always..I love how you disect me:)
ReplyDeletegreat job glad i dicovered this you did a wonderful job of expression of your passion 'blue eyes'
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